Small rewrite of Gandalf and Lisa opening

I changed the first few lines of Gandalf and Lisa (part 1).

If the opening of the tale didn’t make much sense to you i ask that you give the beginning a reread.

If anyone actually prefers the older version i would love to hear about it.

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